The best thing about your story is the background about your cousin and how you related his battle with cancer to your own life. I would like to know more about his family. One thing you should think about changing is working on the voice inflection in your narrative. Another good thing about your story is the photos that you included.
The best thing about your story is the background about your cousin and how you related his battle with cancer to your own life. I would like to know more about his family. One thing you should think about changing is working on the voice inflection in your narrative. Another good thing about your story is the photos that you included.
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